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I’m so fascinated to see your world is composed in this way perfectly!

Thank you

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Worth reading for the poem alone. Thank you.

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Love how you tweaked the main images in the poem to reflect a feel of disassociation and surrealism.

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So helpful, thank you. I'm struggling with a poem's ending right now. Sometimes endings just come to me, not this time. It's good to be reminded to end with an image.

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So clear and so helpful! Thank you.

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